考研英語一大作文範文與解析（文都版）

2013考研英語一大作文範文與解析

文都教育名師韓蘇

2013年英語一大作文圖仍然延續了考研之前幾年的考察內容，即考研了與大學生相關的六類主題其中之一。這六類話題爲：第一種：人的健康；第二種：人的成長；第三種：社會的環境問題；第四種：社會的義務與責任；第五類：文化的好現象；第六種：文化的壞現象。

觀察2013大作文圖片可以得到以下的相關信息：圖中的年輕人爲大學生；2.走在路上，目標衆多。

在文都的課堂上，我們強調“描述圖片：抽象爲主”的描述原則，所以在面對此圖片時，我們可以將其歸類於六類主題中的“人的成長”，即“在路上的年輕人”的抽象含義。而多條道路就是，成長中的選擇和機會。

所以，描述圖片人物可以使用，詞彙較爲簡單的“young people”，其餘的內容可以使用六大類詞彙中的成長內容，進行寫作。如：confidence、Attainment、achieve attainments、striving spirit、surmount the difficulties等即可。

在此再次強調寫作的相關要點如下：（1）描述圖片：抽象爲主；（2）說明現象：會寫爲主；（3）分析原因：靠譜爲主；（4）建議對策：普通爲主。

結合授課內容以及六大主題詞可寫出範文，如下：

As is vividly depicted in the picture, many young people are standing together when they find that there are so many ways to ，all of them are stopping there and waiting for help. Obviously, it is the shortage of confidence for their future that makes it impossible for them to get the attainment they want to.

Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce and there are more and more chance for us to get. But it is impossible for the ones to achieve attainments if the ones have no striving spirit to surmount the difficulties. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on the striving spirit. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of fighting is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.

To my way of thinking，the problem that all of the college are just stopping and waiting but no fighting and thinking will generate severe consequences ures should be adopted before things get worse. It is high time that all of us ,parents, educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to make young people change their outlook of life and acquire determined spirit. Only by this way is it reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future. (238)