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雅思8分作文感想 結尾技巧很重要

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良好的開始是成功的一半,對於雅思作文考試來說也是如此。不過,雅思大作文的開頭很好,必然也需要有一個精彩的結尾才行,這樣才能讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。雖然雅思作文的分數並不是取決於結尾段落,但是一個漂亮而乾脆的結尾段還是會爲文章增色不少,也會將前文出現的小瑕疵掩蓋掉,把大作文的分數拿到最高。下面是小編爲您收集整理的結尾技巧很重要,供大家參考!

雅思8分作文感想 結尾技巧很重要

  雅思8分作文感想--結尾技巧很重要

招式一、回答問題answer thequestion

E.g. When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I thinkit is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friendand support our way of life.

這個結尾段落明確地提出了自己的觀點,不是所有的科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全沒有用處的。

招式二、不添加新的信息not apply anynew information

E.g. Happiness is considered to be very important in is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.

用1句話明確自己的觀點,幸福很難定義,可能有兩個因素起到作用。

招式三、2-3個句子爲宜 2-3 sentences are enough

E.g. Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Finally, Ithink it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work. If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.

2句話,作者的態度很明確,學生不可能花所有的時間去學習,否者就會完全失去對學習的興趣,所以也應該給學生一些放鬆的時間。

一般在結尾段的最開始部分,考生就應該給考官一個明確的信號詞,讓考官瞭解文章已經進入尾聲了。這裏所謂的信號詞就是一些結尾段的套句:

信號詞:Finally, to sum up, inconclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall

句型:

1. it can be concludedthat…

2. we can findthat…

3. I think itis also important to remember that

4. the mainpoint is to make sure that

5. I believethat/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that

招式四:可採用以下技巧

1.總結式(重述前文)

把前文中的觀點再在結尾段進行重述,但是不能重複與開頭段或者題目中的單詞

E.g. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?

Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of rising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.

把solutions進行簡單的再次描寫--父母、好的託兒所、政府的資金扶助。

2.兩分式

把文章涉及到的主題人或者物分成兩種,對其進行分別的說明。

E.g. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this ad completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

Nevertheless,in better economic circumstances, few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work. If learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value in children's development.

對有錢的家庭而言,家長很少送小孩去做童工;如果是爲了錢或者其他,可做兼職。

3.折中式

很難判斷其中到底誰佔據主導地位,或者什麼是最重要的,兩者是缺一不可的,需共同存在。

E.g. Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.

Either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerfuleffects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.

兩者是缺一不可的,天賦和後天培養同等重要。

4.轉折對比式

提出另一種羣體,與之相比,會產生什麼效果來支持自己的觀點。

E.g. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money than people in other important people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.

把運動員與其他方面的工作人員進行對比——比上不足比下有餘。

總之,如果要寫出一篇好的雅思作文一定要善始善終,這纔是拿高分的黃金定律,希望考生們能夠根據上文的一些建議找到適合自己的結尾方式,得到理想的成績。

  雅思小作文寫作實用黃金50句(一)

table shows the changes in the number the period ... 該表格描述了在...年之...年間...數量的變化。

bar chart illustrates that... 該柱狀圖展示了...

graph provides some interesting data regarding... 該圖爲我們提供了有關...有趣數據。

diagram shows (that)... 該圖向我們展示了...

pie graph depicts (that).... 該圓形圖揭示了...

is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 這個曲線圖描述了...的趨勢。

figures/statistics show (that)... 數據(字)表明...

tree diagram reveals how... 該樹型圖向我們揭示了怎樣...

data/statistics show (that)... 該數據(字)可以這樣理解...

data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 這些數據資料令我們得出結論...

is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如圖所示...

rding to the chart/figures... 根據這些表(數字)...

is shown in the table... 如表格所示...

can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in... 從圖中可以看出,...發生了巨大變化。

the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 從圖表我們可以很清楚(明顯)看到...

is a graph which illustrates... 這個圖表向我們展示了...

table shows the changing proportion of a & b ... 該表格描述了...年到...年間a與b的比例關係。

graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 該圖以圓形圖形式描述了...總的趨勢。 is a column chart showing... 這是個柱型圖,描述了...

can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of... 如圖所示,兩條曲線描述了...的波動情況。

the period ined level. 在...至...期間,...基本不變。

the year ... 在...年到...期間...

the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998... 1995年至1998三年裏...

then on/from this time onwards... 從那時起...

number ined steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). ...月(年)至...月(年)...的數量基本不變。