高中英語作文高分祕籍
一、詞彙
詞彙是構成一篇作文的基本要素，高級、準確的詞彙更是一篇好作文不可缺少的“磚”。我們可以從使用高級詞彙、連詞的使用、詞組的變化使用來讓我們的作文有一個好的“建築材料。”
使用高級詞彙可以讓我們的作文更上一層樓。
所謂“高級詞彙”就是文章中運用得精準的詞彙。作文中如果可以用高級詞彙代替普通詞彙那會讓閱卷老師眼前一亮。試想一下，如果閱卷老師在改了n篇平淡無奇的作文後突然看到你的作文用更加高級的詞彙表達了和其他人一樣的意思，他肯定覺得你的英語水平要更好，從而給你打高分。我在這裏歸納了一些可相互替換的詞彙：
important→fundamental /significant
related→relevant
improve→promote
old people→the aged
government→administration
excellent →outstanding
solve →tackle
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這一類的詞有很多，這就需要各位學弟學妹們在平時的學習中多積累，畢竟積土成山嘛!
連接詞是我們最常用的，不管在哪篇文章中都可以看到它們的身影。要注意使用連接詞不能也只是萬年不變的firstly、secondly、because，要多用詞組或複雜的連接詞。比如：
(1)表先後次序：
at this time; at last;
previously; eventually;
last but not least;to begin with;
to start with;to end with;
afterwards; preceding ;
originally;ultimate
(2)表因果關係：
since; as; for;
in that...; owing to; due to;
for the reason that...
the reason seems to be obvious;
as a result of;consequently;
as a result;hence;
in consequence;accordingly;
under these conditions there upon
(3)錶轉折關係：even so;however;though;even though; in spite of; regardless of;and yet; but unless. nonetheless
(4)表並列關係： as well as;either...，or...;...
(5)表遞進關係：
furthermore;moreover;further;
in this way ; not also...;
...; in addition;
additionally;besides;moreover;
on the one hand..，on the other hand...;
(6)舉例關係:
for example;for instance;
such as; a case in point is...;
the point is best illustrated with the example of …
(7) 地點關係：
beyond; opposite to;
adjacent to; at the same place;
over; in the middle;
around; in front of;
in the distance; farther;
here and there; above;
below; between; on this side.
這些都只是一些常用的，更多的是需要你們去積累。最後，還有一個原則我要分享給你們，“單詞不如詞組好，詞組不如句子好”，如果一個詞組和一個單詞都能表達你的意思，那麼就用詞組去表達;如果一個句子能準確地表達你的意思，那麼就用句子去表達。
二、句子
句子方面有以下幾點可以多去琢磨琢磨：分詞、倒裝、強調、修飾。
分詞，多用分詞形式表達句子比用簡單句更能吸引閱卷老師的眼球。比如：If such is the case, you should apologize to him. 如果用分詞結構表達，就可以把is換成being，句子就成了Such being the case, you should apologize to him.這樣是不是顯得高級一些呢?
其實我們經常看到倒裝句，只是自己用得並不多，倒裝時常和虛擬語氣、省略句聯繫在一起。如果一篇作文中能夠把倒裝句用得很溜，那也會是一大亮點。強調句也是作文中上午一大亮點，這個大家可以平時多注意一下，運用得好就是錦上添花。如：Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.
最後是修飾，修飾即從句的使用。賓語從句、定語從句、狀語從句、主語從句這些都可以用在我們的作文中。比如：
(1)主語從句
It is common knowledge that…;
It goes without saying that…
(2)賓語從句
We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.;The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.
(3)定語從句
As is shown/ illustrated/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…;
There are many reasons why …;
It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.
(4)狀語從句(時間，原因，地點，條件，讓步，轉折等)
Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.
