3句話解答如何系統地準備雅思寫作
準備雅思寫作，3句話就可以了。大家想知道是什麼嗎?具體請看下文!
3句話解答如何系統地準備雅思寫作
關於如何評價一篇雅思作文是好作文，3句話就可以了。首先你想對了(審題對了)，然後你寫對了(沒有語法和拼寫錯誤)，最後他看懂了(表達準確)。很抽象對不對，那就舉個例子：談到遠程工作的好處，首先就去寫“節省車費”。
關於雅思寫作題目想對了：
確實可以節省車費，那麼上班的車費一般有多少呢?一個月100多人民幣(起晚了打車四五十不是正常車費開銷，尤其不屬於大多數人的選擇)。這個車費的數額，在國外同樣不高。所以，是弱的論證。
那麼，在寫作文的過程如，這一點就不能作爲一個主要的點來寫，而應該當做次要、附帶的點來寫。
再舉個例子：2017年5月6日雅思寫作考題 Some young people commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks. Some people think they should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"
young people包括：1) young adults: generally people in the age range of 20 to 39 (or 40)2) children，沒有對young people的正確認識，這個題目就很難回答到點上。
關於雅思寫作內容寫對了
95%以上的考生對“寫對了”的理解，都停留在“語法正確”或者“語法正確且翻譯成漢語後正確”上。當然，這個標準是有意義的，它可以幫助考鴨達到雅思寫作6分。(其實，考官要看懂6分的作文，基本都靠猜)
學生的備考心理是矛盾的：1. 寫得那麼普通，得不到一個好的分數;2. 考官要批改那麼多作文，哪裏有時間發現我的語法錯誤。能讓1和2同時成立，那麼考官必然要做到：總是能注意到作文中寫得不普通的地方，又總是會忽略作文中的錯誤。(我選擇微笑着離開)
關於雅思寫作內容他(考官)看懂了
前提：大多數女生都留長髮。結論：留長髮的都是女生。讀者應該能夠判斷，這個邏輯是錯誤的。
換一個前提，我們再來試試。前提：英國人使用的絕大多數英文都是語法正確的。結論：語法正確的英文，都是英國人使用的。這次，你會判斷結論錯誤嗎?如果結論是錯誤的(語法正確的英文，不都是英國人使用的)，那麼什麼是英國人使用的英文?你能找到答案嗎?因爲找不到答案，所以“語法正確的英文，都是英國人使用的
我們一起來看一些語法正確，但是英國人不使用(因此考官判斷爲錯誤)的英文。
學生在寫作文時，寫道：1) 護士需要 adjust to departments (適應各個部門)，因爲護士要在醫院的不同部分工作。而且醫生也有自己的 treating habits (治療習慣)，護士需要適應了才能提供好的協助。
另外還有
2) profound outcomes 深奧的(研究)結果
3) make achievements 得到成就
4) demand working specifications (我也不知道什麼意思)
從語法上來講
1) adjust to departments 正確，因爲 to是介詞，介詞後面接名詞 departments，合理;英文中有washing machine, dining room, reading comprehension，符合以上結構的短語 treating habits 自然就是合理的
2) profound outcomes 形容詞+名詞結構，合理
3) make achievements 名詞+動詞結構，合理
4) demand working specifications 動詞+(現在分詞修飾的)名詞結構，合理
但是，這些都不是英文(只是英文單詞)，都不是英國人會使用的英文，都是要被考官判斷爲錯誤的英文，都是要讓考鴨在考試中扣分的英文。
想讓考官看得懂，就要使用英國人使用的英文。道理就是這麼簡單。
有了對以上3點的分析，如何系統準備雅思寫作，答案就有了。
1. 多看題
2. 多想思路
3. 多看題目解析
4. 提升思考的能力
5. 掌握全套語法知識
6. 掌握各個話題的詞彙
7. 把你的作文當做英文來審閱
1. 多看題：這樣可以發現出題的規律，但是考試回憶的題目，很多錯漏，需要找到其中的錯誤。
2. 多想思路：多看題目解析理出自己的一套答題思路，減少考試中思考的時間。但是自己想的不一定是對的，需要發現錯誤並改正。
3. 看題目解析：吸收別人好的想法，糾正或者改善自己的想法，彌補自己的不足。不過，別人想的也不一定是正確的，所以還需要找到優秀的解析。
4. 提升思考的能力：推薦書籍《批判性思維》，有中文版，有電子書，只需要看其中舉例講解的部分，2個小時可以看完。
5. 掌握全套語法知識：雖然語法對了，英國人不一定看得懂，但是完全沒有語法的句子，英國人看懂的可能性微乎其微。另外，針對寫作的語法學習，不能停留在“瞭解語法現象”的基礎上，而應該是能夠運用。
舉個例子：新聞揭露犯罪。(如果你知道expose)Some news exposes frauds.
如果讓你用“主系表結構”來寫這個句子呢?
1) Some news is about frauds.
2) Frauds are the topic/focus of some news.
這是會運用語法的考鴨能夠做到的。
6. 掌握各個話題的對應詞彙：注意，光記得單詞沒用，因爲寫作不是詞彙考試，關鍵是你得將單詞寫到到句子裏，表達出英國人看得懂的意思。舉個例子。risk 冒險，你會用嗎?“冒着受傷的風險”，怎麼表達?take the risk of getting hurt
7. 把你的作文當做英文來審閱：這種事兒靠自己基本上是不可能做到的，可以找英國人幫你看。
1. 對於小作文無法快速構思的同學：就常見的雅思小作文常見精典題型的文章框架、數據的詳略安排和比較有系統的梳理，做到拿到一道題就能快速構思框架,以下是推薦用來做此練習的小作文題目：
構思結束後如果有不確定的，可以參考範文(如果真題上又考官範文的話，當然請注意範文的框架不一定就是唯一最好的，有疑問的可以直接問老師)。
2. 大作文容易離題、偏題的同學：對題目的理解錯誤或者不到位會影響到審題出現偏差進而導致離題或偏題，建議大家可以挑選一本市面上的雅思範文素材(如《十天突破雅思寫作完整真題庫與6-9分範文全解》)，先讀題，自己嘗試進行點的構思，再將自己的想到的點和範文中的進行對比;
構思分論點過程中可以套用以下句式來保證邏輯性：我認爲高中生應該參加社區義務勞動(支持的觀點)，因爲這能使他們有機會更深入地瞭解社會(分論點)。
如果這個句式不成立，那請三思你想的分論點是否有離題的嫌疑。
3. 對於大作文想不到點的同學：針對這點老師在課堂上會講解一些方法，如分類法、對想法、萬能法等，這些方法能在短期內較高效地幫助大家拓展思路和梳理分論點，但如果想要真正地坐到遊刃有餘，平常的積累是必須的。如果時間允許，希望考生平常能就常見的幾大話題進行分論點的梳理。
舉個例子，拿政府類話題講，考生手中最好有這類題型的常見真題，可以通過閱讀範文，或者關鍵詞搜索英文網頁(_的同學首選Google，不能_的湊活着用必應)，閱讀相關材料的方法，推薦的網站有：The best answer to any question(英文版的知乎),(議論文素材蒐集),TED: Ideas worth spreading (視聽材料：TED演講視頻，官網上有關於各個關鍵詞的小標籤)，News, sport and opinion from the Guardian's UK edition | The Guardian 衛報等一些主流媒體的網站。
閱讀過程中可以做兩件事：
1.摘錄有用詞彙、表達、句型，請注意甄別詞句的風格是否夠正式、學術;
2.可以利用思維導圖等進行思路拓展。
3.有條件的話可以邀請一同備戰的考生一起進行頭腦風暴、挑選和組織分論點。
4. 對於詞彙表達匱乏、容易出錯和使用不準確地道的同學：
很多學詞彙量較大的學生常常閱讀能拿到令自己較滿意的成績，但是每每動筆就感覺詞彙量匱乏，因爲很多詞只停留在認知的階段，還沒被“激活”。那怎樣纔能有效激活詞彙呢?最方便的方法當然是每次都有老師直接給你把俗爛的表達替換成更準確地道的表達，但是這大概只有極少數在VIP學生能享有的服務，而且這種方法無法增強學生學習的獨立性，那麼自己在家該如何提升自己的Lexical resource呢?
a.詞的替換：
在word中進行寫作-選中需要進行替換的詞-右鍵-同義詞。當然很多電子字典或在線字典也有同義詞詞典的功能，如，mac版自帶的Oxford Thesaurus of English就有這一功能;
b.詞的搭配：
很多同學在寫作的時候會發現對很多詞的搭配不確定，有時候沒辦法就湊活寫上去了，這時推薦兩個在線詞彙搭配網站:
普通版(user-friendly)：
the English Collocations Dictionary online
詞彙量和詞法夠牛的同學：
5.對於語法錯誤較多的同學：
a.如果自身語感很好或語法已經掌握得很好，卻常常因爲不夠細心而出現小的語法錯誤的同學，建議平常掐時間練習，並養成檢查的好習慣;
b.對照以下的語法小錯誤清單，提醒自己，逐條校對，儘量做到接近零錯誤：
1)可數名詞單數是否赤裸裸?
2)三單是否注意?
3)詞性是否明確?(to do/doing?)
4)時態是否明確?
5)存在句型(there …)的簡單句中是否又出現了謂語動詞?
6)主被動是否正確?
7)標點是否正確?(which從句和分詞短語等作狀語時是否需要用逗號隔開)
8)另外，一同備考的考生之間也可以進行peer correction，很多時候同伴總能看到自己看不到的錯誤，而且通常大家都是很擅長“找茬”的 J
2.對於語法錯誤較多，且自身經常無法判斷正誤的同學：
好好學語法。(除非你有大把的光陰和絕佳的英語環境允許你培養出優越的語感)
6. 對於想要句式多樣(Grammatical Range)的同學：
注意再追求句式多樣性的同時要避免另一個極端，避免出現句意的累贅、冗長甚至錯誤，或者不能很好的做到上下文的銜接(Coherence & Cohesion)。
雅思大作文範文：解決能源危機
能源危機是指因爲能源供應短缺或是價格上漲而影響經濟。這通常涉及到石油、電力或其他自然資源的短缺。能源危機通常會造成經濟衰退，是一個全球性問題。下面來看一下關於這個話題的雅思寫作範文。
There is nothing unusual about energy like coals and oils being consumed, principally because economic development depends on natural resources all the time. But what is happening today is extraordinary judged by the standards of the past. It is energy depletion on a massive scale and this problem is so knotty that should deserve our closer heed.
Amongst the diverse factors contributing to the energy crises around the world, government’s short-sighted policies and citizens’ extravagant use of automobiles are probably the two most significant ones. By presuming on their natural resources, quite a few countries, especially developing ones, are eager to develop their economy in order to gain an edge over their rivals. Admittedly, their intensive use of the energy facilitates, to some extent, the developments of other industries in short term. Additionally, the amount of private cars increases at such a breakneck speed that the petroleum used amounts to an intimidating proportion of the natural resources.
The consequences are undoubtedly disastrous for human beings. Although countries can boast their growth of GDP, their citizens have to endure the ever deteriorated environment with stinking gas belching from factories and vehicles, polluted water due to fuels infiltrating underground, even ultraviolet radiation in the absence of ozone layer and, therefore, their quality of life is by no means improved. Also, sustainable
development can never come into true in this situation, meaning that our descendants can benefit nothing except sterile land and polluted air and water from their ancestors.
Therefore, our government must take serious steps to attack those problems. The first and foremost is that governments have to reverse their mindset and no longer deem the growth of GDP their first goal. Rather, the betterment of citizens’ quality of life should deserve more attention than the economic growth. Furthermore, the use of private cars should be discouraged by authorities, who must shoulder the responsibility of improving public transportation in order to facilitate people as well as release the burden of energy consumption.
In conclusion, to avoid the phrase “filthy rich” added to themselves, countries must pay more heed to the efficient use of their energy and the issue of environmental protection, while they develop their economy; otherwise, environmental apocalypse and energy crisis are feared to happen in the horizon.
雅思大作文範文：電腦與現代教育
寫作題目
Are computers an essential feature of modern education? What subjects can be better taught using computers? Are there aspects of a good education that cannot be taught using computers?
題目解析
Topic words
Computers Essential features / absolutely necessary
Modern education / good education
Task words
There are no specific task words. Three separate questions are given.
Questions I should ask myself
Do I think computers are essential for education? What subjects do I think are best be learnt using computers? What do I think are the features of a good education, and are computers important in it?
The answer must
Answer each of the three related questions. If you answer the second and third question you will answer the first question, which is the most general and gives the basic topic of the essay. Show which subjects can benefit from the use of a computer, and explain why a computer is so useful. Show what cannot be taught by computer, and explain why a computer cannot help with those areas. After explaining when computers are useful and when not, write a compulsion in which you say whether computers are essential in education or not, using arguments from your essay.
雅思寫作範文
Introduction shows main idea
Computers are now essential in many areas of life – modern banking, retail and information exchange among others. However, this is not true for education. At a simple level some subjects may be better taught using computers, but to explain important concepts a human teacher is still indispensable.
Why computers do well, with examples
There are some subjects in which a computer can be used successfully to teach. Elementary mathematics, elementary language leaning, any area which requires a student to memorize basic facts through repetition is well suited to computer learning. The computer can be programmed to provide an endless number of simple questions, and as the student answers these questions the facts are learned and reinforced.
What computers cannot be, with an example
However, in the learning and practice of more complex ideas, the computer is not adequate. A computer can evaluate an answer as right or wrong, but it cannot determine why. It cannot find out why a student is making mistakes, and then re-present important concepts in a different way so the student will understand. It cannot determine at what stage in a mathematics problem the student has made an error, it can only indicate that the final answer is wrong. Tasks involving reasoning cannot be taught by computers, as there are too many variables for a computer to deal with successfully.
Conclusion re-states main ideas
Thus, while computers may be useful as a tool for practicing simple skills, they are not an essential feature of modern education, because they cannot monitor a student's grasp of concepts, nor evaluate a student's reasoning. Until further developments in computers are made the human teacher will remain indispensable.
雅思大作文範文：建築物
在雅思寫作中，關於建築物的話題也出現過，當設計一個建築時，最重要的是考慮它的內在用途而不是它的表面，對這種說法，你同意還是不同意呢?
寫作題目
When designing a building, the most important factor is inside use of the building rather than its outside appearance. Do you agree or disagree?
Which is more important, function or appearance? This has always been a hot topic for so many years.
範文
As people are becoming more and more practical, they pay great emphasis on functions of things. But when people are satisfied with material life, they have spiritual requirement. And aesthetics is one of their pursuits.
The basic requirement of a building is its inside use. No one buys a house that he cannot live in only to appreciate its appearance.
As I have said, modern people are practical, so we never do things that cannot benefit us. But with the new techniques and advanced tools, up until now, human beings have no problem to construct a building to satisfy our practical use, thus in this sense, on the basis of usefulness, we have a higher requirement of beautifulness.
That’s why our world has become more and more beautiful.
But it also depends on different cases. Buildings used for exhibition should not be the same with those used for residence. Great buildings for exhibitions or used as museums are art works themselves and worthy of our appreciating.
The most famous is Sydney Theatre. Many people visit it for its great beauty rather than enjoying concerts.
If the building is only for us to live in, then there is no necessity to invite a famous architect do design such an elegant house. Such buildings are also out of our purchasing power.
To sum up, the inside use and the appearance are both very important. But it doesn’t mean that we should always give the same weight to the two. It should depend on concrete occasions.
