高考英語滿分作文2014年安徽
題目：
爲了幫助中學生健康成長，某中學英文報開闢了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名爲Worried的求助信。信中該同學向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。請用英文給該同學寫一封回信。
內容要點如下：
1.表示理解並給予安慰;
2.提出建議並說明理由。
注意：
1.詞數120左右;
2.信中不能出現與本人相關的信息;
3.信的開頭與結尾已爲你擬好，不計入總詞數。
考點：考察半開放性作文
【參考範文】
Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:
First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
寫作指導：
本文屬於半開放性作文，要爲你編輯Jamie的口吻回覆Worried的求助信，他的困擾：近日容易發脾氣，使正常的學習和生活受到了影響。要注意書信的格式和特殊用詞。
要點：
1.很遺憾聽說對方有此問題。並解釋每個人都可能會遇見這樣的問題，所以不必擔心。只有的是要學會控制自己的脾氣。
2.提出建議：與信任的人進行交流，告訴別人你的困擾，釋放自己的壓力。同時多參加各種戶外活動，和朋友多玩球類運動。保持樂觀的心態。
對於考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇佈局的能力和組織要點的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關係，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現文章脫節問題。儘量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞彙和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【一句多譯】
每個人都會有過這樣的一段時期，在這時情況都很糟糕，所以你不要太擔心了。
(1)The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much.
(2)It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much.
