有魅力的女孩 The Attractive Girl

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The standard of beauty in China is believed to be the person who has the white skin and big eyes, because people are affected by the commercial ads. So many girls dress well and buy a lot of cosmetics to make them look beautiful and attractive. I have seen so many beautiful girls but only the one who is funny that can attract my attention. 
在中國美的標準被認為是那些擁有白皮膚、大眼睛的人，因為大家都受到商業廣告的影響。所以女孩子們都穿得很漂亮，買很多化粧品讓自己看起來很漂亮，有吸引力。我見過很多漂亮的女孩，但是隻有那些有趣的女孩才能夠吸引我的注意。

The charm of a person is not from appearance, but from inside. I met a person when I joined my friend’s party. The girl was playing cards, while other girls played tricks and made the boys feel embarrassed. Then the girl laughed and put her cards on the table and asked to play other games as it was so boring. What she did made the boys set free from the awkward situation. I admired her so much and made friends with her. Later I found that her life was so excellent. Though she did not make up often, she dressed neatly, and her room was tidy. When I asked her question about the brands, she could offer me some advice.  Bur she never showed off it. 
一個人的魅力不是來自外表，而是來自內在美。在我參加一個朋友的聚會時，我遇到過一個女孩。那個女孩當時在打牌，其他女孩則在捉弄人，旁邊的男孩們感到很尷尬。女孩笑了笑，把她的牌放到了桌上，説玩其他的遊戲，因為這個遊戲太無聊了。她的所作所為讓男孩們從尷尬的局面中解脱出來。我很欽佩她，所以和她交了朋友。後來我發現，她是非常優秀的，雖然她不常化粧，但是她衣着整齊，房間也很整潔。當我向她資詢牌子問題的時候，她也會給我一些建議。但是她從不炫耀。

The girl was full of charm to me, and I learned a lot from her. 
這個女孩對我來説是充滿魅力的，我從她身上學到了很多東西。