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雅思口語高分範文之:喜歡乘飛機旅行的人

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雅思口語part2新題預測之:喜歡飛機旅行的人(a person who likes travel by plane),主題是經常飛行工作的工程師爸爸,範文用詞地道,邏輯連貫,適用於各類考生。口語複習強勢助攻口語提分,考試在即,速速修煉,召喚7分神龍,從此分手雅思。

雅思口語高分範文之:喜歡乘飛機旅行的人

雅思口語高分範文之:喜歡乘飛機旅行的人

Describe a person who likes to travel by plane.

You should say:

who this person is

how you know this person

where this person travels to

and explain why this person likes to travel by plane.

1.適用考生:全適用

2.主題:工程師爸爸爲工作而飛

3.故事線:我的父親,他是一名工程師。由於他的工作,他有大量的客戶到上海、杭州和廣州等大城市,甚至在其他國家。在一個月的近第三的時間裏,他出差去會見客戶,參加會議,處理一些嚴重的問題。這就是爲什麼他經常旅行,尤其是乘飛機去不同的地方。

雅思口語高分範文示例:

I think this person would be my father who is an engineer. Due to his work, he has got loads of clients to the big cities such as Shanghai, Hangzhou and Guangzhou, and even in other countries. And almost two-third of the time in a month, he is on business trip to meet clients, attend meetings and tackle some severe problems. That’s why he has travelled a lot especially by air to different places.

I feel that as for a businessman, taking the airplane would save him much time and he is able to finish his work with high efficiency. Sometimes the price of a flight ticket can be negligible if he successfully make orders with clients. Also, the service on the plane is much better than that on the train. The flight attendance will offer various beverages and food, and the passengers can even ask for free blankets and back cushion. The passengers on the plane are not as many as that on the train, which makes the plane a cosy place for relaxation. My father always tells me that the quietness on the plane makes it possible for him to take a rest between the two cities. I think that’s the main reason why he insists on taking planes for business trip.

  【雅思口語Part 2&3話題】喜歡乘飛機旅行的人

今天的題目是醬嬸兒滴:

Describe a person who likes to travel by plane

You should say:

Who this person is

How you know this person

Where this person travels to

and explain why this person likes to travel by plane.

這道題目說難也不難~要知道雅思口語的一大訣竅就是:融合同類題目的答案。

這個題目就可以和許多話題相結合:

“一個經常出差的人”

“一個對社會有用的工作”

“一次早起的經歷”

.....

只有你想不到的!

丨思路解析:

首先,很多考生在拿到這個話題的時候會存在不知道該說什麼的情況,覺得這個題目從未見過。

但是仔細想想看就知道這個題目是一個非常好融合的話題,可以和“一個經常出差的人”“一個工作優秀的人”“一個對社會有用的工作”“一次有意義的談話”“早起的經歷”等話題融合。

在這裏描述一個人的時候,我們可以涉及到幾個方面,“personality”性格、 “appearance” 長相 、“occupation” 職業等等。

很明顯,如果我們在這裏將自己的朋友設計爲一名必須要經常出差的人會降低表達難度。如:一個需要出差招聘的老師,一個商務人士 business man,一個設計師 designer都是非常好的選擇。

第二點,我們看到這裏的四個問題,其實很簡單,可以將前面三個問題放在一起去描述,最後一個問題單獨描述。

“他是誰”的問題,可以將“朋友”類所有的話題融合進來形容,He is one of my colleagues, 或者he is my classmate in high school,都是非常簡單的表達,也順便解決了第二個問題“你怎麼認識他的”。

在這裏如果是高端學生,可以將“一次和陌生人談話的經歷”融合進來,將他的身份設定爲一名陌生人,但是不要在這個問題的敘述上停留過多時間,因爲這個問題並不能突出他的特點。

第三個問題,“他經常去哪裏”這個問題可以將“我想去的城市/ 國家”聯繫在一起,敘述一個自己想去的國家。

最後一個問題最難回答,也是最重要的,“爲什麼這個人喜歡坐飛機呢?” 這裏可以突出他的性格特點,如注重效率 focus on efficiency 或者喜歡有意想不到事情發生:unexpected things 都是可以選擇的內容。

另外,在敘述不下去或者卡頓嚴重的情況下,可以採用對比的方式,對比飛機和其他交通設施,如火車和私家車,都是很好的拓展話題方式,保證了考試評分標準中非常重要的一條:“表現出充分交流的意願”。

丨高分詞彙:

efficiency效率

traffic jam 交通堵塞

take off 起飛

landing 着陸

check-in 登記

在形容人性格的時候,可以用creativity創造力 fashionable 時尚的 experienced 有經歷的

丨再給大家一個比較好的Sample:

I would like to say something about my teacher whose name is Simon.

He is responsible for recruiting international students for my university, which is why he has to fly a lot to foreign countries to promote my university and give places that he visits frequently are England and Canada because students from these two countries are particularly interested in learning Chinese in China.

I think he enjoys the travel because he once told me that sometimes some unexpected but wonderful things would happen during the flight. For example, there was a time when he had to travel to Leeds, a city in England. In the airport he lost his wallet. He was desperate to search for it but the boarding time was quite limited. Surprisingly, he finally found his wallet as a cleaner found the wallet under the chair where he sat. He told me that he was quite grateful at that moment.

  雅思口語考試停頓會扣分麼

在雅思口語考試中,特別是在第三部分,由於一些問題比較難,考生需要一些時間邊考慮邊作答。在這種情況下,出現適當的停頓,是完全正常的。

問:如果在考試的過程中,說話有停頓會不會影響得分?

答:在雅思口語考試中,特別是在第三部分,由於一些問題比較難,考生需要一些時間邊考慮邊作答。在這種情況下,出現適當的停頓,是完全正常的。即便是我們在回答別人提出的中文問題時,一般也是需要一些時間來整理思路和語言的。然而,如果回答問題過程中出現過長和過於頻繁的停頓,肯定反映出考生的對問題的分析理解能力和語言表達能力的欠缺,這些的確會對考生的考試結果造成負面影響。

雅思考試 (IELTS - International English Language Testing System, 國際英語語言測試系統)是一種較全面地針對聽說讀寫四項能力的、爲打算到英語國家學習、工作或定居的人們設置的英語水平考試。

雅思考試由劍橋大學考試委員會外語考試部、英國文化協會及IDP教育集團所共同擁有。

雅思分學術類和普通類兩種題型,學術類主要適合留學,普通類主要適合移民。雅思考試產生聽說讀寫四個單項分數,單項的滿分是9分(精通英語),其次是8分(優秀英語),7分(良好英語),6分(掌握英語),5分(勉強掌握),4分(有限英語),3分(少量英語),2分(少量單詞),1分(不懂英語),0分(沒有考試)。

全球超過170個國家8,000餘所院校機構、政府部門和職業機構認可雅思成績並將其作爲一項權威有效的測試英語溝通能力的方法。

  雅思口語考試高分句型盤點

讓我們先來看一個案例:

在幼兒園階段,我們的小朋友課可以很容易的說:聲sound,信息出來,但是我們不明白他的寓意。到了小學生階段:學生學會了組詞:聲音 sound of voice,隨後用形容詞來修飾,轟隆隆的聲音 noisy sound of voice,其所表達的意識就更加鮮明瞭。

到中學生階段,大多數學生可以找到想要描述的對象, 例如:火車轟隆隆的聲音 the noisy sound of train,大多數基礎好的同學都能做出完整的句子如下,我聽到火車轟隆隆的聲音,I heard the noisy sound of the train. 這個句子很好,過去式做到了,主謂賓都有,在雅思口語考試中我們完全可以輕鬆拿到6分。

對於廣大的大學生朋友,特別是想要考到雅思7分的同學,那麼下面的句子纔是大家最終奮鬥的目標:儘管我聽到火車轟隆隆的聲音從我耳邊響過,我仍舊集中精力看書,所以我覺得自己很專注。

Although I heard the noisy sound of the train passing by my ears,still I could focus on reading,that’s why I think I was really concentrated.

句中although……., still…….的從句首先是一個亮點,體現了考生的思維模式,已經到了主從句的複雜句型, heard, could, was都體現了考生的靈活的過去式,passing by, 動詞ing表伴隨,that’s why表結果的從句,was concentrated靈活的被動語態。這樣的句子就是7分,甚至7.5 到8分如果考生的發音也非常的舒服。

這樣的一句話就是利用了嫺熟的語法技能把場景,寓意,讓步轉折全部表現到位,值得學習借鑑。

經典句型介紹——被字句,所字句

下面是一些最經典常用的被動語態表示說話者感覺,我們來一起體會一下

I was really amazed by ….我被…震撼了。

I was really amazed by the Forbidden city in Beijing.

I was really amazed by the 2010 World Expo in Shanghai.

I was impressed by……我對…印象深刻。

i was impressed by the West Lake in HangZhou.

I was impres ssed by his English.

I felt adj./done感到…

I felt relaxed & refreshed 感到被放鬆,被清新

I feel pressured 感到被壓迫

I feel content 感到滿足

I feel satisfactory 感到滿意

我所想說的是…… The thing I want to say is that…

我所想說的是現代人更加喜歡在假日旅遊而不是呆在家裏

The thing I want to say is that modern-day people are much keener on travelling rather than staying at home during holidays.

我上次所看到的主要是是……The thing I saw last time was mainly that…

我上次所看到的主要是全國的遊客都井然有序的排隊參觀每一個館在2010世博會上。

The thing I saw last time was mainly that tourists nationwide all queue up for each pavilion in great order inside the 2010 World Expo Park.

我所珍惜的自由是……The freedom that I cherish is that…

我所珍惜的自由是我自己一個人主,獨立安排自己的學習和休閒,不再和父母及他們的嘮叨在一起了。

The freedom that I cherish is that I now live on my own, independently managing my study & leisure time, not living with my parents & their nagging any more.

我所要提一提的是……The point that I want to say is that…

我所要提一提的是現在的生活水平和消費層次已經大大好於20年前了

The point that I want to say is that the living standard & the consumption level are much better and higher than those two 20 years ago.

所進入我腦海的第一點是……The first thing that sprang into my mind is that…..

所進入我腦海的而第一點是古建築可以讓訪問它的人鮮明的學到歷史而不是從書本上。

The first thing that sprang into my mind is that visitors to those historic buildings can learn history in a vivid way rather than from a book.

之所以……是因爲……The reason why…is because…

之所以我想成爲一名英國大學的教師是因爲我想在西方國家傳播中國的文化。

The reason why I want to become a professor in a university in UK is because I hope to deliver Chinese culture in western countries.

之所以我們中國學生要學好英文是因爲它可以我們能夠更多的機會和更廣闊的發展平臺。

The reason why we Chinese students have to learn English well is that it can provide us with more opportunities & wider stage for development.

由於這樣一個事實……This is due to the fact that….

現代人應該經常去健身房,這是因爲運動可以拉昇身體,肌肉,韌帶;對於久坐的辦公室工作階層,運動對他們的脊椎也是很好的。

Modern-day people should go to the gym regularly. This is due to the fact that exercise can stretch our bodies, muscles and ligaments, for those who sit for too long, sports can really do good to their spines.

這是因爲……It is because…

我們要多吃蔬菜和水果,這是因爲他們富含維他命和纖維對我們的消化和新陳代謝系統是很好的。

We can try to eat more vegetables and fruits, it is because they are full of vitamin & fiber, helping our digestion & metabolism system.

熟練掌握以上句型,有助於在雅思口語中取得更高的分類,快記下吧!