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「寫作篇」5月19日雅思考試預測+解析

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A類小作文

padding-bottom: 141.59%;">「寫作篇」5月19日雅思考試預測+解析

 

小作文重點關注柱圖、餅圖,繼續預警流程圖和地圖。

 

以下爲柱形圖例題及範文解析:

 

題目:

You should spend 20 minutes on this task.

 

The chart below gives information about Southland’s main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025.

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

Write at least 150 words.

 

Southland’s main exports in 2000 and 2018, and future projections for 2025

 

審題思路:

本篇柱形圖(bar chart),主要展示了Southland地區過去(2000年)、現在(2018年)的主要出口商品狀況,以及對未來2025年的推測,需要考生對主要信息進行總結、並對比相關信息。橫軸分別是旅遊業、奶製品和肉類三種主要出口項,縱軸是每項在不同年份對應的出口金額0-10( £billion)。

 

解題思路:

既然涉及到三項產品、三個不同年份,又要抓要點、作對比,考生不妨先從三項產品體量的橫向比較,例如出口份額最多的是旅遊,而後奶製品,最後是肉類。然後再以每項出口產品內部隨着時間變化的趨勢,如旅遊逐漸增長、奶製品增後略有回落、肉類持續下降。寫作過程中、涉及到份額值的表述時,請一定記得寫billion這一單位。此外,還應注意過去、現在、將來數據描述時對時態的精準把握。

 

參考範文:

 

The bar chart depicts the performance of three driving exports in Southland in 2000 and 2018, with their future projections for the year 2025. Overall, it can be observed that international tourism is likely to dominate among the three sectors, though dairy products will continue to stay strong.

 

In 2000, it is obvious that international tourism ranked first among the three export sectors, with its revenue exceeding a little over 8 billion pounds. Then the data has increased steadily, reaching a higher level at nearly 9 billion in 2018. It is predicted that the proceeds of international tourism will continue to rise to an approximate 10 billion pounds till 2025.  

 

The revenue of dairy products surged from around 7 billion pounds in 2000 to nearly 10 billion this year. It is estimated that exports in this sector may fall back slightly to approximately 9.5 billion in the future.  

 

Meat products remain the third major exports in Southland, with its revenue decreasing from 6 billion to roughly 5.5 billion in 2018. Experts predict there will be a further decline to 5 billion in 2025.

 

Word count: 183

 

重點表達:

①depict: v. 描述

②dominate: v. 佔主導

③surge: v. 飆升,激增

④revenue, proceeds: n. 收入,收益

⑤文中加粗詞彙表示“大約,大概,近似”,可交替使用。

 

 

A類大作文

 

大作文重點關注政府類、社會類、教育類話題。

 

以下爲本場考試重點題目解析。(想要參考完整版預測及話題庫的同學,請關注滬江留學微信公衆號,回覆“機經”獲得完整版預測。)

 

題目:Some people think health care should be free for everyone, while others think they should pay medical costs for themselves. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

 

題型:雙方討論題

 

話題:政府類

 

解題思路:這一命題要求我們從兩個方面分別討論:醫療保健費用應完全免費,還是由個人負擔。可以通過不同方面來論證觀點,比如政府向醫院投入過多資金,會有怎樣的弊端;而個人完全支付看病費用,可能會有怎樣的結果。

 

參考範文:

It has been widely acknowledged that easy access to health care stands as a basic interest for individuals, as well as a symbol of caring and responsible regime. Therefore, some people argue that health care should be totally free to achieve that notion, while others hold doubts on that. As far as I am concerned, both the government and individuals should be responsible for medical costs.

 

Those who advocate free medical services believe that everyone has equal right to enjoy a healthy life and that government has the duty to sponsor those who are in need of medical help. Many families are still struggling to survive under the poverty line nowadays. Without free medical treatment, it is surely a disaster when these economically underprivileged people get ill. If the major labour source falls down, the whole family may be badly stricken, thus exacerbating the gap between the rich and the poor, which is certainly not a sign of benign for the further prosperous of a nation.

 

Nevertheless, sound as it may be, a totally free healthcare is much too divorced from reality, and equity as well. If patients do not pay for the cost, hospitals will have to rely on the funding from government or other investments. Therefore the right of self-management is crippled, together with a lack of peer competition. This policy may result in poorer services, less researches in new theories and slower reactions to the patients, all of which leading to the opposite way from caring for people of the nation. Worse still, talented doctors may choose to work in private hospitals if the free healthcare policy is implemented, for the salary will definitely be higher than that in public sectors. That is to say the rich and the poor are still being treated in different ways, which may raise even more conflicts.

 

To sum up, medical care should not be totally free from my perspective, and a feasible way to ease the burden of the poor is to exempt the cost of some basic and common treatments, while leaving other special demands on charge.

 

重點表達:

①It has been widely acknowledged that: 衆所周知

②regime: n. 政府

③struggling to survive under the poverty line掙扎在貧困線上

④economically underprivileged people: 窮人

⑤self-management 自主治理

⑥divorced from reality 不切實際

⑦exempt  v. 免除

 

本期真題預測、分析老師:

 

席瑛瑋老師

滬江網校雅思老師,線上線下授課經驗豐富,在大學有兩年多出國留學課程及SQA專業課授課經驗;雲南師範大學英語和教育學雙學士,東國大學研究生院國際商務碩士;獲劍橋TKT資格證,British Council雅思教師培訓證書,高中英語教師資格證書等。

竹子老師

滬江網校留學資深教研老師,同濟大學英語語言文學碩士,主攻雅思託福等留學考試。參與滬江網校《雅思保七衝八》、Unlock A1-B2雅思能力課程、World English B1、新版雅思6.5分閱讀、新版雅思7分聽力等課程的設計規劃與製作,並幫助多名1V1學生達到雅思寫作7分。